WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing
We were out camping out on a mountain I woke up and decided to take a walk then there was a bridge.I wanted to go across it but it didn't look strong enough.As I stepped on the first plank of wood it made a creak as I walked slowly across,It looked old.I felt nervous.Finally I was at the middle I wonder how long it will last after a few years .I kept walking,on the other side I could only see fog and a big tree I went as slowly as I could so I could not fall in that river .Suddenly the wind blew and slowly rocked the bridge I only had to step on one more piece .By the time I was there it was lunch, I carefully ran across the bridge, luckily it did not break .
